Thứ Tư, 14 tháng 3, 2012

entry 1 Đào Thị Mỹ Hạnh


Item 1
“Mình là ta đấy thôi, ta vẫn gửi cho mình.
Sâu thẳm mình ư ? lại là ta đấy !
Ta gửi tro, mình nhen thành lửa cháy,
Gửi viên đá con, mình dựng lại nên thành.
                                ( Chế Lan Viên,Ta gửi cho mình)
Rhetorical device :
         rhetorical question and paradox  
 rhetorical question :« Sâu thẳm mình ư » 
paradox : “tro”- “ lửa cháy”,  “viên đá con”- “ thành”
Message: love has a great power, once two people become stimulated, anything even is out of date, they can make the wonderful things by love.  



Item 2:
Rhetorical divices:
Symbol: image of % (interest rate), money ( price, money value), a person( businesspeople)
Overstatement: the interest rate up to sky that means it is very high
Message: inflation causes high interest rate, money value goes down rapidly and the businesspeople have to try to keep their money
Item 3
“I never killed a deer before but I took a shot at it”
Rhetorical device:
Pun: “take a shot”: shooting or taking photo
Message:
There are two ways to understand. Firstly, the author takes a photo and doesn’t kill deer. Secondly, the author has to shoot by gun in order to kill the deer

2 nhận xét:

  1. I have some comments in the 2rd item. From my point of view, metaphor: image of %( interest rate), a person (businesspeople) which are not symbols. Only symbol is money (price, money value). The message is good

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  2. Good job!
    In the item 1, I think you should add the rhyme: "đấy", "cháy". Item 2 and 3 are okay. Interesting!

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